Friday, July 2, 2021

The Vacation!

 On Tuesday our teacher made us do some fun four minute writing pictures.So four minute writing is when the teacher will hand out pictures to the class and we will have to write a story about that and we only have 4 minutes to write it.The next day we will choose one the pictures and write a full story about it.  

4 comments:

  1. kia ora lucia this Azaan from room 8. I like you're yellow and pink gradient.I like how you saved space to put the picture on the bottom.

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  2. Kia ora Lucia I am Camille from St Mary’s School.
    I liked how you chose a sunset-gradient background. I think it really fits the theme of a summer vacation.
    I learnt that you could write lots in 4 minutes! Maybe you could add more photos next time.
    Please visit my blog!
    here
    Mā te wā
    Camille

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    1. Thanks Alot i visited your blog cool stuff and learning thanks for the compliments Byeeee

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  3. Kia ora Lucia I am Sophia from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked how you used descriptive words in your writing and the colour of your background.
    I learnt that you enjoy writing stories!
    Maybe you could tell more about what you did next time?
    Please visit my blog
    here/ A >
    Mā te wā
    Sophia



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